Tuesday, May 09, 2006

So sure...

Hey people...

I'm kinda busy at work, so I can't do my blog on being a hero...But I've been playing around with this poem for the past 2 days. Let me know what you think about it.

It absolutely scares me how you're so sure
Willing to trust someone with my past is pure-
ly odd to me and surely I know you've been hurt, you shared that so freely
And it boggles my mind
Cuz though I've been expose to many types
I still haven't encountered your kind
Am I blind?
Or are my eyes wide opened as I'm lead down the exact place from whence I came?
Back down to heart break?
Or
Perhaps to do what it takes for me to change and make you happy that you decided to partake
in this crazy thing I call my world
Your smoothness amazes me
Your sweetness craves my soul to interact with yours
As I type away it's all nonsense for life is a daze...
Mind a blazed from the cluster of thoughts
As I muster the courage everyday just to say "hey"
Trying to act normal while still dizzy for your text effects me throughout the day
But it's no use...
The changes in my dialect gives me away

So truthfully, I want you to stay and play

And adore me...

For I promise thee
I won't flee


That's it. I'll admit it's still kinda rough...LOL.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I like it- you can actually improve on this great piece of work?